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 random poem in the making

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Lady-Vampire
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PostSubject: random poem in the making   Fri Nov 06, 2009 12:15 pm

Your Still The One I think about,
Your Still The One I want to hold,
Your Still The One I want to Be With,
Your Still The One I Love ♥


Still planning on Adding more but i don't know what else to add on to it yet. Question
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PostSubject: Re: random poem in the making   Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:33 pm

its sounds great, maybe you could add something like your still the one who keeps me sane, your still the one i can trust, i dont know maybe add some things that tell or show what this person can do for you?

you dont actually have to use my ideas, im not great at doing poetry, and i hope you can get it finished, its really quite nice.
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PostSubject: Re: random poem in the making   Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:33 pm

thank you and i will try it out tonight your idea.
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PostSubject: Re: random poem in the making   Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:07 pm

ok, if it doesn't fit thats ok, hopefully some of it may help you think of more for your poem, hopefully you will post the finished poem too, as it seems very nice.
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