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 Poetry of the Soul.

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Hidden Eyes
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PostSubject: Poetry of the Soul.   Mon Nov 09, 2009 2:25 pm

These are many of my poems that I have written in about a week. Yes poetry is one of my favorite ways to release my stress, problem, anger. You should give it a try.
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Untitled 1.

Everything about you is what I want to be,

You are the very person I envy,

But me act like you,

That can never be,

For we are opposites,

And we don't attract,

But when we work together,

We make up for the things we lack,

Our determination is drawn from true power,

That is how we can finish complicated tasks in meare hours,

But now that you are gone I must remain strong,

I dont know what you did that was so wrong to deserve that fate,

But I do know for me it is not to late,

That is why I turned my life around,

Because your death was so profound.

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Untitled 2.

One thing we need to always do,

Is enjoy the simple things in life,

And dont forget your past too,

That is something you can never do,

For we learn for the mistakes,

Thous who do not learn from the past are condemnd to repeat it,

When I say these things you better believe it,

Trust me when I say I mean it.


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Power Of Success.

This passion is my pain,
The pain helps me get the gain,
It is my push,
My power,
My furry,
It makes me, Makes me do all these things that start from nothing,
This is my true inspiration,
One of the few reasons why I am here to be,
Its a miracle baby,
That I can survive what makes me,
I always end up on top,
Rising for the worst of it,
I'm astonished I cam make it,
I dont know how i do it,
The power flows through me and the rythmic tune.
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Release. (two poems in one I guess)

I put the headphones on and take away,
All the stress and all the pain,
But I never bitched or complained ,
I just dealt with my problems in my own way,
But as usual as I always say,
Gotta deal with the pain,
Nothing more you can really do,
Simply take it in stride and do what I do,
Buck up and push through,
You will always have someone there for you,
Your friends are your family so don’t be afraid rely on them,
That’s what they’re there for,
If they are true friends they will always be there and answer the door,
As the door swings open ask you if you are hurt or broken,
If you say ‘No I will be fine, I’ll live not like I will die’ ,
But that’s that mistake,
If you don’t release some stress and let go of some pain,
You might look for other ways,
Ways that cause more pain,
Then build an addiction that is hard to break,
Now you can’t concentrate,
All you think is when will I get my next hit,
Thinkin you cant wait,
Hurry up come on now concentrate,
Snap out of it you need to get your life together,
Find someone you love and live life together,
But you can’t since you spend all your nights alone,
All you do is pick up the phone to get stoned,
But what you really need to do is call a real number,
A group that will help you,
Take you out of your addiction,
Build a life with you and help you,
So just do me a favor,
Pick up that phone and dial home,
I’m still waiting by the phone.
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The Reasons.


The reasons I write are to help me fight,
Help me fight some of the morbid thoughts,
Depressing and complicated the truly hated thoughts,
I hate what I did in my past,
So this is much better and sure it will last,
But I still have thous days,
Where I say '*Censored* IT I just wanna be normal for a bit',
So I disappear in a cloud of smoke,
Get lost in the high and no more wish to die,
Calms my nerves and slows my mind,
I start to think clearly and then I'm fine.
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Lost But Not Forgotten.


Senseless ramblings of my inner mind,
A way of expressing how I feel inside,
Sometimes I'm happy,
And other I just wish I would die,
But there is one thing that remains constant,
Thats the hidden rhyme,
Story I tell from line to line,
Some of its from my own life,
Other times from some poor persons life,
But the only way to make through it is to take things in stride,
Sure I have had a friends die,
Honestly it did hurt and I did cry,
For when they are taken away you truly die a little inside,
But I took in stride,
Continued my life,
Went day by day and slowly they managed to fade away,
But they will never be forgotten,
Forever in my mind,
Just refuse to acknowledge them from time to time,
For the pain is great and I cannot concentrate at the task at hand,
But now the poem has ended for it hurts to move my hands,
For the pain is so great I lost track of my original plan.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry of the Soul.   Mon Nov 09, 2009 2:49 pm

HOLY you are relaly good at poetry...I too write poems, but mine are a bit moer graphic, and I may need to have permission to post them. XD hopefully I will be allowed, but keep up the good work, as it is very helpful to you and to us.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry of the Soul.   Mon Nov 09, 2009 3:41 pm

Thanks, I honestly dont like the poems that I write most of the time and also scared about the judgement that comes with posting it. But it means a lot everytime i get a good comment such as yours Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry of the Soul.   Mon Nov 09, 2009 4:09 pm

Existance?

I have nothing to hide,
Sometimes I can honestly say I wanted to die,
But I always knew deep down inside,
That these thoughts were far from alright,
But in this society its considered 'normal',
There is no pill and there is no cure for these feelings,
But there is a way to help you out of it,
Even if it is just for a bit,
This is your true friends,
The ones who are always there and will always listen,
That is that I believe I have been put here for,
For there is one things that I have always done right,
That's been there for a friend,
Through all the pain and all the fights,
So do me a favor and don't take your life tonight.


This poem I wrote thinking about all of my lost friends that have died over the years.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry of the Soul.   Mon Nov 09, 2009 4:29 pm

no problem, your poems are inspiring ans truthful, and they express feeling and are real.

they are not just poems you made up because you wanted to, they reflect how you feel and that is what makes them beautiful.

Keep up the good work, i like your poem existance, it is very nice!!

Take Care

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