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PostSubject: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 4:42 pm

Invisible

Forgive and forget you say,
Such hypocrisy I think.
To forgive you must remember,
Something of which I refuse to do.

I say 'Just forget?'
'Yes', you say, it is easy.

I do not agree.
To forget, you must forgive.
I shall not,
for I have then to remember...
I will not.

I am numb,
unable to forgive or forget.
Lingering detached from me latest dreams.
More like nightmares to me.
Dark,
Despairing,
Death it is.
Bruises,
disguised,
scars all over,
hidden no doubt.
No one shall know.

Memories linger,
Redolence wounds me.
In the back of my head,
A little girl pleas,
Hurt,
Forgotten,
Unloved,
Unforgiven.

Invisible.



By Vanish

I wrote this poem last year, when I was in the hospital, I have many more and if you want to read them, tell me I will post a few more.

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Vanish
Let me vanish in the wind and be free like I have always dreamed
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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:00 pm

I enjoyed this poem I can relate to how you felt when you wrote it like I was in your mind.

Keep writing Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:01 pm

awe thanks...I have a whole book printed of poems I wrote, like a duo tang...

I just have to find ones which are appropriate and have minimal swearing and graphic scenes...xD

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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:06 pm

I think if you just put a warning in the title it will be okay XD
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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:13 pm

yah like a *TW* (trigger warning) or maybe swearing/censored warning xD well the site already blocks words like the F word and stuff, so that is good...

But i don't know about graphic nature and all..

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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:18 pm

really i never knew it blocked swearing interesting
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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:22 pm

yah in one of your poems you put F*** it and it blocked it....it says *censored*

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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:37 pm

lol i didnt notice XD
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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:38 pm

lmao its alright, check it out now, you will see...

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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:40 pm

ohh it does :O I actually am somewhat shocked but its understandable why it does that Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:42 pm

yes at least it protects anyone who is offended or triggered by swearing, and some people, believe it or not are offended/triggered...and its really not good...

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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyWed Nov 11, 2009 1:08 am

As i have Said before, you are Amazing at this. I Personally think you should Have some of them Published in a Book or Something.

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PostSubject: Re: Invisible by Vanish   Invisible by Vanish EmptyWed Nov 11, 2009 6:10 pm

awe thanks. I would not publish them unfortunatly as they are too personal...but someday i could think of it, maybe later on, and with poems that are less meaningful to me, and a bit more unpersonal...or maybe not...it really depends..my skills are not great, some people are much better, wait rephrase, most poets are MUCH better at this than me.

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